Hi Kristen, You now have a single sentence statement; however, you need to focus on the issues involved in this one case, rather than just on Roger Barnett. For example: "Citizens should not be prosecuted for protecting their own property against illegal immigrants." Do you see how that addresses the "issue" rather than just the Barnett case? mrs s Revision assessment: 3
Hi Kristen,
ReplyDeleteYou now have a single sentence statement; however, you need to focus on the issues involved in this one case, rather than just on Roger Barnett.
For example: "Citizens should not be prosecuted for protecting their own property against illegal immigrants."
Do you see how that addresses the "issue" rather than just the Barnett case?
mrs s
Revision assessment: 3